A Song That Never Fades! Poem by sabitha geethall

A Song That Never Fades!

Rating: 5.0


It has been a long wait...
but you never said anything,
tranquil like a deep greenish lake...
frightening and tempting..
towords it's unknown depths! !

The day swirled in to dusk,
it's twilight....
both outside and in life!
time flew away..on butterfly wings,
crawling and in haste....

My flowers lost life,
streaks of silver in my hair..
my youth lacks it's flavour!
but the love remained irrevocable.

I still wait in patience,
faith in heart and love my lamp..
to reunite you in heaven's aisle!
where you will be mine..
and i'm your's......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 18 June 2011

my vote is a 10. Thank you.

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Walterrean Salley 18 June 2011

The day swirled in to dusk, it's twilight.... both outside and in life! time flew away..on butterfly wings, crawling and in haste.... Beautiful imagery. I love the entire layout and approach you’ve used to tell this story.

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R.k Das 06 April 2011

a very intense poem, , the personal pathos so beautifully depicted in a a few stanzas, thanx

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sabitha geethall

sabitha geethall

trivandrum, kerala
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