# # A Soul - Part Two Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
# # A Soul - Part Two
A lonely mom
where has dad gone
as this thought ran through me
a tear dropp woke me
a fascinated loving mom's eye
she found her 'him' in me
the old neighbor lady..who
serves him food as a duty said
'your son looks lovely..so much like you
your eyes nose and hair too
why don't you go see him'
'let's see' was all the reply from that rough man
a broken home that was
for the last six months
sharing the same roof those two..dad and mom
not a word shared between the two
one to the other they just provided
yet...yet..they never shared
'your eyes nose and hair too'
what the old lady said about me
did bring him to me....
Samanyan, here you have touched on several things- indifference, sublimation by mothers, neglected childhood, longing to belong- very touching and well composed. Mamta
Very touching...a sample piece of many couples in real life...a dolorous poem
vivid imagination and live images painted here. a touch of reality makes this poem stand up and talk to the reader....really nice one
very nice... touching....a mirror of him in you great ideas here 10+++ Lovelots, Snow
A lovely poem told from the perspective of a child's soul...pleasing images, too. this is a 10 again, my votes are not registering.
the second part describes well, how the feelings are turned agony without share the dad's affection...touching lines
an infants soul that knows so much.i do think that infants and children know a lot but cant express for only the lack of vocabulary.well done sam.
Flowing with feelings that bring words to life. Well done my friend.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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sad............. sandhya