A Status Of Success.....! Poem by simran arora

A Status Of Success.....!

Rating: 3.0


A shadow of respect,
a flame of response,
a desire of destination,
a bridge of dreams,
a plazer of demonstration,
a heart of modulation,
a birth of justification,

All just from a creation,
working for his nation,
his family and his passion,
overcoming every extinction,
with a big regret to distruction,

a new lump of dreams,
a new cry for success,
a new mind for aproval,
a new sun rise for hapy lif,
with a new passion for animation,

All jst for life he deserves,
with enfresing his desires,
with happines, and fires,
with love and respect,
and a few beautiful regret,
he realy steps to the world,
he desrvs.....that is SUCCESS....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Young Church Poetry 15 July 2012

Success comes with love and respect. Good work

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Ahmed Abomahfouz 01 April 2012

a poem of brilliant writer..strong words / creative ideas / different style. marks 10 +

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