simran arora

Rookie (22-july-1996 / gurgon)

A Status Of Success.....! - Poem by simran arora

A shadow of respect,
a flame of response,
a desire of destination,
a bridge of dreams,
a plazer of demonstration,
a heart of modulation,
a birth of justification,

All just from a creation,
working for his nation,
his family and his passion,
overcoming every extinction,
with a big regret to distruction,

a new lump of dreams,
a new cry for success,
a new mind for aproval,
a new sun rise for hapy lif,
with a new passion for animation,

All jst for life he deserves,
with enfresing his desires,
with happines, and fires,
with love and respect,
and a few beautiful regret,
he realy steps to the world,
he desrvs.....that is SUCCESS....


Comments about A Status Of Success.....! by simran arora

  • Rookie - 112 Points Young Church Poetry (7/15/2012 1:49:00 PM)

    Success comes with love and respect. Good work (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 140 Points Ahmed Abomahfouz (4/1/2012 10:39:00 AM)

    a poem of brilliant writer..strong words / creative ideas / different style. marks 10 + (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 30, 2012



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