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A Step Away From Paradise

Just around the corner
My paradise seems to be,
Just a little out of reach
A step or two away from me.

I`m unable to clasp it
Or gently hold it by the hand,
I`ve not even been issued a sample
That would help me understand.

I`m sure there is a way
I can stretch a little more,
So at the very least
I could be knocking on the door.

I`ll keep trying to reach it
If ever I should make it there,
I won`t live in paradise alone
I`ll invite many more to share.

Submitted: Sunday, June 17, 2012
Edited: Friday, January 04, 2013


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  • Juan Olivarez (6/20/2012 9:55:00 AM)

    one of the best poems I have read this year, says a lot.

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  • Hans Vr (6/19/2012 9:33:00 AM)

    What a very nice and considerate poem.
    Gives the reader a very warm feeling inside.
    Well written

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  • Charles James (6/18/2012 4:26:00 AM)

    So at the very least, I could be knocking on the door Beautiful Heather!

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  • Valerie Dohren (6/17/2012 4:43:00 PM)

    Lovely poem Heather - can I come with you when you find it?

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  • Romeo Della Valle (6/17/2012 3:45:00 PM)

    Beautiful! I am very sure I will come by your paradise, it would be a great pleasure my dear friend Heather! This a simple but moving write! As usual, Beauty and Talent merged in another of your great works! 10+++ God Bless You! Romeo-NYC (Thank you for all your valuable comments!

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