Indranil Bhaduri

Rookie - 239 Points (Kolkata, India)

A Story Begins - Poem by Indranil Bhaduri

You are like a tiny boat,
Sailing alone in the blue ocean
Seeking to hug your dream lover
Dipping yourself with intense emotion

You are like a flying bird
Searching for your caressed loved one
Immersing yourself in deep romance
And dazzling right under the sun

You are like a rainbow picture
Embracing yourself with your longed one
Who kissed you like a sudden storm
And thereby a story had just begun!

Copyright © 2013 Indranil Bhaduri

Comments about A Story Begins by Indranil Bhaduri

  • Rookie - 446 Points Prasanna Mishra (4/25/2014 4:38:00 AM)

    Each line flows freely as an honest articulation. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,660 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (3/8/2014 5:44:00 AM)

    Every human life is by itself a unique story in itself...the joys and sorrows, successes and failures... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Monami Ghosh (1/21/2014 10:39:00 PM)

    There is a certain intensity to this that I appreciate. Also, the title is engaging and the build up to the closure.. beautiful I would say. All the stages.. fluid and deep. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bhavna Singh (1/13/2014 3:40:00 AM)

    very nice poetry......indranil bhaduri (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,767 Points Patricia Grantham (1/7/2014 11:01:00 AM)

    Oh how I really love this very passionate write. A love as deep
    as the ocean. A story with a beginning and hopefully a happy
    ending. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,111 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/21/2013 11:12:00 PM)

    Woah d sudden storm kisses, how true! ! A creative romantic poem with a difrent twist. Kudos! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 811 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (10/6/2013 8:44:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem of sweet images. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (9/25/2013 11:58:00 AM)

    Yeap here at the ending appreciation's notes have been begun :)
    lovely romantic poem, brief but too deep.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (9/13/2013 12:05:00 PM)

    oh you always sprinkles romance in air...bravo sir (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 867 Points Liliana ~el (9/10/2013 4:33:00 PM)

    WHOAH. Now this is really perfect! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,451 Points Neela Nath Das (9/10/2013 7:21:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem Indranil.Thus they lived happily.......Soothing note! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Rituparna Sen (9/9/2013 8:49:00 AM)

    Lovely short poem. Romance begins. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 9, 2013

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