A Street Kid Poem by Asif Andalib

A Street Kid



On the wide footpath
A street kid was calling God
Recklessly for food!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jacqui Broad 11 October 2011

I don't take this literally. The street kid is that person who is far away from his home - Heaven. The path being the road we take to find our way back and shouting for food/guidance when we get lost. Very beautiful...

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Ency Bearis 06 October 2011

nice haiku, meaningful

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Diana Rose Tolentino 06 October 2011

I like short poems with large thoughts. the realities of life don't always appear to be beautiful. sometimes we just have to face it as it is.

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Allemagne Roßmann 01 October 2011

question remains if God listened..but i did where i find no one has commented this one of yours...as they want to hid their faces away from harsh truths...

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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