Gold Star - 6,939 Points (2/2/1981 / kottayam)

A Success Untold - Poem by SALINI NAIR

A foundation that crafted
Recite that projected it always
Stories of illusions
Hardship that lead to failure
Efforts that lead to norms
Tears spread and wiped in silence
Target that made it a success
Rise of success that leads to sanctity
The flee to occult in a hard way
‘’Rule of nature what will fulfill the extreme wish’’

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about A Success Untold by SALINI NAIR

  • Gold Star - 50,036 Points Akhtar Jawad (10/2/2014 11:10:00 AM)

    Taste of a dish that is prepared after a troublesome fatigue is the best taste. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,939 Points Salini Nair (4/13/2014 9:03:00 AM)

    Rule of nature that will fulfill the extreme wish................. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/5/2014 11:11:00 AM)

    Beautiful and positive poem. When a Success comes after hardships, Words are not enough to describe it. It's really a Success Untold. I loved the way you presented it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 5, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 23, 2014

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