SALINI NAIR

Gold Star - 6,614 Points (2/2/1981 / kottayam)

A Success Untold


A foundation that crafted
Recite that projected it always
Stories of illusions
Hardship that lead to failure
Efforts that lead to norms
Tears spread and wiped in silence
Target that made it a success
Rise of success that leads to sanctity
The flee to occult in a hard way
‘’Rule of nature what will fulfill the extreme wish’’

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Submitted: Wednesday, February 05, 2014
Edited: Wednesday, April 23, 2014

Topic of this poem: life


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Comments about this poem (A Success Untold by SALINI NAIR )

  • Gold Star - 25,464 Points Akhtar Jawad (10/2/2014 11:10:00 AM)

    Taste of a dish that is prepared after a troublesome fatigue is the best taste. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,614 Points Salini Nair (4/13/2014 9:03:00 AM)

    Rule of nature that will fulfill the extreme wish................. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,548 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/5/2014 11:11:00 AM)

    Beautiful and positive poem. When a Success comes after hardships, Words are not enough to describe it. It's really a Success Untold. I loved the way you presented it. (Report) Reply

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