A Sweet Lily Poem by Dr subhendu kar

A Sweet Lily

Rating: 4.8


nothing but the beauty untold
curved on the sands of time
the man when stood over the moon.
the glory as blazed by the quest

the story of the passage to new-found land
rocks up the truth hinged upon the crescent belief
mighty warrior unveils her love before to battle field
being befuddled by the softness mutely sharpens the sword

full moon descends slowly by the day of its due course
and you expand when extensive beyond the vision
the breath of flower when intense with fragrance
A sweet lily as i stare on beyond the other side of the sea

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jurietta Duraan 14 March 2008

It sounds like a dream... you use beautiful imagery.

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Coreena Dejesus 15 March 2008

This is a fantastic write, thank you so much for sharing.

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 16 March 2008

This is such a Wonderful piece of poetry Subhendu...I love the imagery and the feeling it invokes it myself as the reader! I only wish I could understand all of the symbolism you weave throughout this piece...because to understand everything sometimes is a Gift... I truly enjoy your work and am so glad to have read it today.Now because of this piece I stand on the other side of this sea you write of and wish to gazing out at this Amazing Gift God gave us...called the Sea. Top marks from me....and Thanx for sharing. Take care of U my friend.......TEN! ! ! Shelley

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Marvin Brato 18 March 2008

A classical poetry filled with substance and imagination! A 10.

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Abha Sharma 23 March 2008

your poems remind me of wordsworth and like him you too are Nature pagan, little things of beauty get a place in your lines and come alive...

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Lady Grace 13 June 2009

poem of love..beautiful and nicely done..grace

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was staring with you and a beautiful lily you let us see..beautiful one

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Duncan Wyllie 27 April 2008

Lots of heart -felt verse here, , Emotion comes through Love duncan X

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Eithne Queen of Celts 15 April 2008

I like your poems, it's a pleasure to read them! I am sure you would do anything to sail over the wild sea and be near that 'sweet lily'.

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Seema Chowdhury 27 March 2008

this is a lovely poem, that i would like to read over and over again. its nice to read a poem that you can feel not only read through the wordings.

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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