A Sweet Surprise Poem by Tia Maria

A Sweet Surprise

Rating: 5.0


It feels just like Christmas time
Waiting for this surprise of mine
What is it, whatever could it be
I am wondering, so excitedly

I almost wish I did not know
Time seems to go so slow
Hearing another car drive by
Could that be the delivery guy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 November 2008

Patients is a virtue my dear, soon a loving token will be here..: -) Andy 10

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Ency Bearis 14 November 2008

might be Santa with Porsche delivering the car in your door..watch out...(just kidding) .. great reminder for the coming holidays.. a great one.. Ency Bearis

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James Nall 21 April 2009

a sweet little rhyme that captures not only the moment of the writer, but, the heart of the reader.10's all the way

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Duh Huh 17 April 2009

Your poems are elegant, breezy and beautiful my friend. They never fail to make me smile with the wit or refreshing candor. Thank you for sharing of your talent. :)

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Howard Johnson 24 November 2008

Nice piece Tia, loved the last stanza..and it feeling of anticipation.

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Fay Slimm 14 November 2008

hey hey Tia - tell us please, what is the surprise, and do not tease....... Fay.

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Lynda Robson 14 November 2008

How exciting Tia, someone must love you, please let us know what it is..... I'm nosey lol, Lynda xx

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