A Sweet Thang Needs Sugar...(Humor) Poem by elysabeth faslund
A Sweet Thang Needs Sugar...(Humor)
All I want is love...
Say it.
All I want is the world...
Wrap it.
Not to cry anymore...
Kleenex.
But, there's three problems.
Of love...you don't speak.
The world...you don't know your backyard.
Not to cry...Kleenex HELL! ! !
Get me four king-size comforters,
Two bottles of vodka,
Carton of cigarettes...and
A one-way ticket to Montego Bay.
And if you ever learn
To make a bow,
After I'm gone...
Stick it on your ass.
Yes, this is clear. A powerfuelled antidote to the vagaries of love. Good close! ! xx jim
Brave, Bold, and dashingly Irreverent, highlighted in that contumeliously magnificent final verse! ! !
Only vodka? This sounds like it calls for some major drinking...
A light-hearted rant from a needle sharp pen with a memorable final line. Stylish, succinct and thoroughly satisfying. love, Allie xxxx
A brilliant solution to my tears....a one-way ticket to Montego Bay! Great advice my friend.
Love, the world, not to cry anymore - that just about covers it. I had that all - in deluded moments, then the hammer fell. Thanks for the re-greeting - I have been writing, just not posting. - Marc
I’m not gonna say I didn’t see the ending coming and still it floored me. For me an enjoyable read
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4/24/2024 12:29:52 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I'm with you on this but no Montego Bay, you'll like Grand Cayman Island better...I use Puffs. Your last line is priceless and the endind stick why I say no Montego Bay with just cause......Your write here is cute, , , did I just say that? yes, well it is....marci.xo