i would have read
that message..a
hundred times
the tail of that message
read thus
'do not drive me to hate you'
i really do not know
why? i saved that message..but
the tail of it shows me
the tail of hope......
does it say she has not started
hating me.......
GOD BE WITH ME
hope i have seen [you show me]
in the tail of her message
a tail of hope
the message in the tip of the tail: be careful when you drive... well presented into a poem...10
A tail of hope a second chance to the sparkling opportunity........well done my dear...10/10
So nice.. With very catching ideas really a tail of hope...a continuous chance..hope.. a chance to take things safely and carefully I love this...the thoughts really nice....inspiring... 10++++ Lovelots, Maia
does it say she has not started hating me....... GOD BE WITH ME You touch the inner most soul with your words, I hope too with you.... and God be with you always my friend. Angel
comtemplation solves many things... good poem.
A nice, good thought indeed. To cite an example, if we don't receive any comments from the readers for our poems or essays, it can also mean that the views and philosophy of the contents are acceptable to the world! Otherwise, there could have been atleast a stir from a single reader! 'Do not drive me....' this view reminded me of the above. My father held the view that if we did not receive any letters from our friends and relatives, it could also mean that there were well off! What do you say of it?
a sublte love theme. i wonder you could write love poems too as skillfully as others. shan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very intelligently written piece Samanyan....with as Lynda says ' a sting in the tail'