A Unique Mobile Poem by Prof Niamat Ali Murtazai

A Unique Mobile

Rating: 5.0


Day and night I check my mobile's screen
To read my friends messages or see missed calls
For this I am ever ready and keen
So much from space in my simple lot falls.

Without the mobile I feel uneasy
It is a must of my existence
With it I am relaxed, with it busy
Along with time, energy it takes expense.

But I require a unique mobile
That may get some message from the Highest
Who lives at a distance of endless mile
Who regards me as the friend dearest.

Yes I have that unique mobile in my chest
Where I can read all messages and calls too
Without charge and balance, it's the best
Yes, you also have, it is the heart true.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 21 October 2014

Yes! telepathy which shall convey the message without charge and balance. A good write.

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Shahzia Batool 13 February 2012

A primitive impulse to stay connected to God, that made pagans worship the deities...the poet's heart gets the relief in the mystic realization in the last stanza...though the technology -register is used but technology is not actually meant here...the classical poets search God's creatures to praise Him, n the modern mystic approach touches the man-made things n then touches God...the alternate rhyme takes the effortless natural flow...yess we receive msgs...but most of the time...this unique mobile we keep off....an eye-opener! ! !

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Seema Chowdhury 08 September 2011

nice and true, without technology we feel lost and disconnected. a nice write. thanks for your comments on my poems. take care

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