abhilash fraizer

Rookie - 0 Points (8-6-1975 / Cochin, Kerala)

A Vacuum Of Dreams! - Poem by abhilash fraizer

The playground is forlorn
The player a grieving loner,
Games were battles; they decided my fate!
One after another, every defeat
Were stepping stones to vacuum!

Life, with its broken garlands
And glasses drained out of love,
Once again comes to welcome me
And wish me good morning,
Mornings are always good, I say!

Alone in the tower of dreams
Against the vast, vast horizon
Overcast with clouds of words,
Weaving the dream I have loved ever
Waiting for the shower I have loved ever...!


Comments about A Vacuum Of Dreams! by abhilash fraizer

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (2/13/2010 9:50:00 PM)

    Weaving the dream I have loved ever
    Waiting for the shower I have loved ever...!
    Outstanding poetic skills displayed here.10./10 again.
    Do read my Stiletto-Tanka page-2 poem-38. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie young writer Athira (11/30/2009 4:42:00 AM)

    hey just superb...........10/10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 30, 2009



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