A Walk In The Rain Poem by Aanand Deepak C

A Walk In The Rain

Rating: 4.5


Slow rain danced in the sky,
As I walked in the cold night
beneath the street light where
rain drops fell like gliterring diamonds

The empty streets beautiful and wet as new
Two pairs of feet walking aimlessly
A dhobi's rain enjoying donkey
Another two pairs sharing an umbrella,
North Indians singing old love songs.

My partly torn umbrella shielded me
till now, started failing as rain grew,
Like angry bees in unison,
the rain drops stung my umbrella,
making my jeans wet near my ankles

It rained like the million times before
the musky smell of the earth
the soft music of the rain drops
stir me, as I wink and spot my friend
running across the street to meet me.

Thursday, May 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: rainy night,rainy season ,rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allotey Abossey 28 May 2015

Good. I love rain so much, well written my friend

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Ayman Parray 28 May 2015

A well written and refreshing poem Aanand. Thank you for sharing

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Aanand Deepak C 28 May 2015

Thanks all for your kind words!

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Kelly Kurt 28 May 2015

The details enrich this poem, Aanand. Thanks for sharing Peace

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Bharati Nayak 28 May 2015

Such a lovely rain song! !

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Chinedu Dike 28 May 2015

Lovely and well articulated narrative poem nicely penned. A beautiful piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9

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Aarthy K 28 May 2015

Beautiful ☺

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