Elena Sandu

A Waltz Of Blue Smiles - Poem by Elena Sandu

Please read it on a waltz rhythm: One! two, three...

She's losing her house
She's losing her house
And what what what what
She does?

A poem she writes
Paints both of her eyes
And feet in dark blue
then she cries:

I'm loosing my house
I'm loosing my house
There's nothing to do
Oh mine!

I'm loosing my house
I'm loosing my house
Blue eyes and blue feet
Oh, sweet!

Why are you so sweet
Why are you so sweet
Blue eyes blue face
and blue feet?

Her handkerchief fly
Slow searching the sky
blue rivers of tears
got dry.

On a smile smiley
colours pass through
With tears and fears
Of blue.

She's losing her house
That's sad very sad
But we know she'll survive
And smile.

Blue cute sign became
In a book of one poem
blue fears, blue tears in
origami folded again.. Insane? ! ..

Comments about A Waltz Of Blue Smiles by Elena Sandu

  • Bronze Star - 2,669 Points Elena Sandu (5/17/2012 9:47:00 PM)

    Thank you dear friend, yes that is what I meant, you are right, true, there is not such word all wrong, yet my intention was to express a crying out of rules, could I be forgiven for two o instead of one? To me that moment that was the sound I felt. Distorted heart at times may be right to distort a sound, was only a howl... I appreciate the correction, I will try to fix it. Thank you, I really appreciate your help. Love and smiles, Elena (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 87 Points Aasiq the poet (5/17/2012 9:03:00 PM)

    oh, no, dear lady.. did you mean to write losing instead of loosing -the latter is not derived from the noun loss which is what you meant, perhaps... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,314 Points Ken E Hall (12/4/2011 3:08:00 AM)

    Sad to lose ones home hence the blues for sure the poem really means more than it says and blue is the straw to cling onto, enjoyed...regards (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 607 Points Rekha Mandagere (12/1/2011 7:23:00 AM)

    Friend, you are really bringing tears in my black eyes reading these pain evoking tears in the deep blue eyes. Each house is beautifully decorated with life sketches.No body in this world should loose their dreams. Let us cling to our dreams tightly, firmly and facing life boldly.Beautiful theme :) I must give 10+++ to put off these blue tears :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 23, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 17, 2012

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