Sylvia Chidi

Rookie - 84 Points (Germany)

A War Song! - Poem by Sylvia Chidi

I see the soldiers marching on
Singing a cold war song
On the road they hold onto their guns
As the fighting goes on all day long

Fight, March, and fight
Shoot, aim and shoot right
Whether the sun shines, this is war
This is war whether the rains pours

This is war where we kill
Our friends, sisters and brothers
For they are our enemies for real
If they choose against us for another

They go to war
Because of a handful of political men
Who stand alive; in erect offices still holding their pens
The soldiers fight until no one stands up anymore!

Fight, March, and fight
Shoot, aim and shoot right
Whether the sun shines, this is war
This is war whether the rains pours

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Comments about A War Song! by Sylvia Chidi

  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Blackwell (11/9/2008 9:29:00 AM)

    Sylvia, your song beats well and more importantly shows us all the futility of war. Bob (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 586 Points Indira Renganathan (8/12/2008 12:10:00 AM)

    Great concept, nice write..I like this poem.Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David Desantis (5/7/2008 11:38:00 AM)

    very nice, i like the constant drumming of it all, no matter rain or shine, fight on fight on...great stuff here Sylvia (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jimi Doyle (6/18/2006 7:28:00 PM)

    sun or rain...
    great poem...
    how do we stop it?
    hhhmmmm? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 18, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 7, 2010


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