A Warm Summer Breeze Poem by Theo Townend

A Warm Summer Breeze

Rating: 5.0


The trees whisper in the breeze
The forest peaceful, quiet, and serene.
The warm breeze like a soft caress,
Momentarily eliminating all stress.

Without delay it carries on
Leaving the place in silence when it's gone.
A summer day, a summer breeze,
Softly whispered through the trees.

The summer breeze, softly it comes,
Quickly it leaves,
Causing soft whispers in the trees.
It came and soon left, a warm summer breeze.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My first poem! Hope all you other peeps read it, love it, and most of all enjoy, comment, and vote. Criticizm is okay, but no insults or mean, negative comments please.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naomi 11 September 2022

I love this so much, I used some of this in my writting but I also gave credits so don't worry 😁

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D. T. 04 June 2022

Very nice.

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Chinedu Dike 28 May 2018

Beautiful depiction of summer breeze elegantly embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A lovely creation. Thanks for sharing Theo and do remain enriched.

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Rajkamal P.j 02 May 2012

good start keep writing.congrats

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