yoonoos peerbocus

Veteran Poet - 1,235 Points (05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

A Water Melon's Truth - Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

Roving back through wild centuries
At rust and ripeness time
To land blood wet, martyrs fed,
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Comments about A Water Melon's Truth by yoonoos peerbocus

  • * Sunprincess * (4/7/2016 8:16:00 AM)

    ............beautifully said, and very nicely penned ★
    Her only hope, wish for nothing on earth
    Save eternal be her internal love's season,
    Akin to sea plain where no autumn comes,
    Though all things go, not one lasts. (Report) Reply

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  • Subhas Chandra Chakra Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/7/2016 4:35:00 AM)

    Real beauty of expression.
    Each slice for life time sweet,
    Munch you as you would grapes or kisses.
    Her only hope, wish for nothing on earth
    Save eternal be her internal love's season,
    Akin to sea plain where no autumn comes,
    Though all things go, not one lasts.
    These lines speak volumes for a short yet virtuous life.
    Tanks for this magnificent poem. (Report) Reply

  • Josey Alfred Josey Alfred (3/11/2016 5:36:00 AM)

    Her only hope, wish for nothing on earth
    Save eternal be her internal love's season
    Akin to sea plain where no Autumn comes,
    Though all things go, not one lasts.
    Very beautiful write,
    Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Adeline Foster Adeline Foster (9/16/2015 2:23:00 PM)

    Ah, a tasty poem. like it! Read mine - Brush Strokes -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Nyota Yasulwe Nyota Yasulwe (7/10/2015 12:25:00 AM)

    lovely poem! I like it and will keep coming back to read. (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (6/7/2014 7:00:00 AM)

    A pickadilly of a poem, frumtastical,
    melon masterful, seed fanatical,
    no reason yet it's truth
    and season all surrounds us. (Report) Reply

  • Payal Lalwani Payal Lalwani (6/7/2013 12:59:00 PM)

    A biography no less with brevity of words.Enjoyed reading.Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Leslie Philibert (6/7/2013 12:16:00 PM)

    a fantastic poem, that deserves all the good reviews (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra Gajanan Mishra (6/7/2013 7:33:00 AM)

    love's season, eternal. thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Babatunde Aremu Babatunde Aremu (6/7/2013 6:04:00 AM)

    A celebration of nature gift! Great write. Thump up for the poet (Report) Reply

  • Azmat Naushad Asif (6/8/2012 4:21:00 AM)

    wow...such an unusual topic to write a poem on (Report) Reply

  • Sidi Mahtrow (6/7/2012 6:16:00 PM)

    The watermelon is filled with nutrients.
    Vitamins, let me mention those heaven sent;
    There are the b vitamins, and of course vitamin c
    But the most important if consumed in excess is vitamin p.

    s (Report) Reply

  • Deci Hernandez (6/7/2012 2:03:00 PM)

    summer's blood. i can drink this blood. its delicious. (Report) Reply

  • Oludipe Oyin Samuel Oludipe Oyin Samuel (6/7/2012 9:53:00 AM)

    We must find inner peace from inner sweetness. That's the trick, the fixed solace factor, even when life's variables drab undyingly. That's the trick. Great majestic poem (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das Neela Nath Das (6/7/2012 8:09:00 AM)

    Off the truck expression! Very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (6/7/2012 7:35:00 AM)

    Everything good and bad bears seeds.
    Enlightening poem. (Report) Reply

  • Manonton Dalan (6/7/2012 2:40:00 AM)

    water melon has one thing to offer
    its sweetness, (Report) Reply

  • Malaya Roses Malaya Roses (8/28/2010 7:57:00 AM)

    every slice shall lead a taste bud to the truth of taste. Seasons, centuries or civilization will change but the we are looking for the same taste. But sometimes in searching for the aim, we forgot how to be not selfish.
    i like this poem and it is good. (Report) Reply

  • Lousia Dai (8/2/2010 10:19:00 PM)

    So profound when reading '......bear peace= a sweet heart, summer blood....' (Report) Reply

  • Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (6/23/2010 12:53:00 PM)

    Descriptive and meaningful! Good poem indeed, ; D (Report) Reply










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