A Wave Of Love Poem by Jolanta Gradowicz

A Wave Of Love

Rating: 4.5


A wave of love approached my boat,
A fresh breeze surrounded me nicely,
My memories should be allowed to float
And to sail away with the wave slowly.

My boat can’t find the right direction,
It moves freely back and forth – I keep balance.
Any returns are out of the question,
I take delight in the smoothing silence…

But the wind is stronger and stronger,
I have to master the rudder to survive,
But the frothy wave is higher and higher,
I was washed ashore, yet I’m still alive…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anna Cellmer 04 July 2006

Sometimes it's very hard to keep balance in this boat but for sure even drowned in the sea of love we can be still alive or more alive then ever :) great write and nice to meet you :) Mił ego dnia Anna

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Sandra Fowler 05 July 2006

Lovely work, Jolanta. Excellent imagery. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 March 2008

the greatest waves is the fear of losing someone

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Preeti - is here! 18 May 2007

Only the fearless and those who keep faith survive the deadliest of waves. Very inspirational!

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Joscephine Gomez 19 April 2007

The last line said it all. I see you as a strong woman - based on this poem.

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Kee Thampi 20 September 2006

wave of love approached my boat, A fresh breeze surrounded me nicely, My memories should be allowed to float And to sail away with the wave slowly. you wish to knit the lovable song in a verse of poem... in is in my heart

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Catastrophe King 07 August 2006

I loved it the way you say 'Ä wave of love....'! This is a beautifully written poem and has a feeling of innocense and honesty. Only if I could grant more than 10! ! ! ! !

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