A Wealthy Nation Poem by akram saqib

A Wealthy Nation

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To grab power more
To snatch everything
To become ruler sole

You always bore
Like this a tinge
Burning your soul

You went to the core
To devastation bring
Between the two poles

With wealth you lore
And praises sing
Of brains with hole

The world you tore
Death toll you ring
A rule out you dole

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 27 April 2009

dear saqib aakum strong and revolutionary lines well written and put together great cheers

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H K 29 April 2009

an excellent write portraying present international scenario!

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 29 April 2009

The quest for more sometimes brings out the worst in us; as many have as their modus operandi, 'by any and all means necessary'. Good write.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 27 April 2009

There is a proverb 'Fair foul means, be a hero' Unfortunately there are more heros through foul means in politics today. well written.

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Sad _eyes 27 April 2009

Sounds like to me you have put alot of time into these words and you needed to get something off your chest. well keep up the good work

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Akram Awadat 27 April 2009

very beautiful poem, well done

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