A Welcome Intruder- Haiku Poem by Mamta Agarwal

A Welcome Intruder- Haiku

Rating: 5.0


In a deep slumber
Felt someone nudge my elbow-
Morning stood tip toe.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bell Martine 09 September 2008

how you squeezed it..joyful

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Manonton Dalan 09 September 2008

just coming home dear got busy dancing with lights but am so happy you have beautiful haiku so i share you one as extention of your haiku.thanks md

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Ency Bearis 09 September 2008

freshly awaken...tip toed steps..to great someone/love one? ... surprise..surprise... Ency Bearis

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premji premji 15 September 2008

i see the slanting rays of morning sun right on my face...*10*

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premji premji 15 September 2008

i see the slanting rays of morning sun right on my face...*10*

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Sandra Fowler 10 September 2008

Absolutely delightful! Ten from me. Love, SandraX

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Sadiqullah Khan 09 September 2008

serene, , , if time wakes you up or the changing colors in light, , shows a good nights sleep 10

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Kesav Easwaran 09 September 2008

haiku- refreshingly impressive...10

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