A Wet Summar Night (Being Inspired By Robert Murray Smith's Poem The Dark Night) Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Wet Summar Night (Being Inspired By Robert Murray Smith's Poem The Dark Night)

Rating: 5.0


Charms of a dark summer night!
Under a roof of a mosquito net,
Stars twinkling, moon so bright,
Dew making things sexy and wet.

I loved that silken blanket, in it,
There was a moon hidden in me,
Within the net a magic was knit,
Twinkling stars inside I could see,

Stars in skyblue sleeping gown,
Twinkling eye lids, smiles insides,
Aromatic hairs, silky and brown,
On her cheeks their naughty glides,

Many more,many more stars,
A singular moon in a soft blue cover,
Ecstatic wind her drunken guitars,
Forget sky, what on earth discover!

Around my neck two round arms,
Lips talking lips in a silent voice,
Unparalleled, summer night charms
My love, my dream, and my choice!

Thursday, January 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,moon,night
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
tom billsborough 05 February 2018

Your poem's sensuous flow takes my breath away. This is a really fine poem, Akhtar

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Valsa George 11 February 2017

A highly sensuous poem ! A starry sky above and the moon trapped inside a blanket! Beautiful!

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Nosheen Irfan 20 January 2017

A beautiful romantic poem. The imagery puts the reader in a lively n romantic mood. Sensuousness abounds. A big 10.

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Khalid Saifullah 19 January 2017

A poem that immediately brought a pleasant smile on the lips, a great work.

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M Asim Nehal 19 January 2017

I read his poem and now yours both are fantastic.....10 I quote: Many more, many more stars, A singular moon in a soft blue cover, Ecstatic wind her drunken guitars, Forget sky, what on earth discover!

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