A Whisper Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

A Whisper

Rating: 5.0


Tic-tack tic-tack
the clock vibrates
as it sounded
the alarming note
that time runs infinitely
but life does not.

Tic-tack tic-tack
Time is running out
so with the breathe
of a man in pain
suffers the sorrow
within his soul.

Tic-tack tic-tack
if mistakes in the past
had not been committed
and can foresee the future
then I would have lived
a life that is perfect.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 11 August 2009

beautiful wording and thoughtful! 10+

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Catrina Heart 11 August 2009

wonderful written piece..................loved the tic tack part! ! !

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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