Alejandra Moreno

Rookie (3-4-96 / Dallas, Tx.)

A White Flame - Poem by Alejandra Moreno

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I can feel a flame inside me
but not just any flame
a white one

It is fead by
the love, the compasion,
and everything that is to be considered good

I can feel a flame inside me
but not just any flame
a flame that heals

It is healing
all the holes in my heart
all the pain, all the agony

I can feel a flame inside me
but not just any flame
a flame that I hope will never end

A flame that I hope
will keep on going
in every sole
that will be passed down
from generation to generation

I can feel a white flame
of hope


Comments about A White Flame by Alejandra Moreno

  • Rookie Justin Unanue (1/19/2010 4:06:00 PM)

    I thought the white flame would be love, so I was surprised to see hope. In a good way.

    Good job. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/10/2010 8:00:00 PM)

    Fantastic flame my friend. Without hope we die even before our death. Keep on writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Knight (1/10/2010 6:53:00 PM)

    Hi Ivette Angel - This is a lovely poem with a lovely theme - A White Flame of Hope. V 1 & 2. It is great to have a flame of love and compassion burning inside you, V 3 & 4 It is not just any Flame - Ivette - It is your own personal flame a HEALING FLAME that can heal a broken heart and take away all your pain and agony - it is a cleansing flame. V 5 I am glad you feel the Flame and (V 6) feel that - like an Olympic Torch - it can be passed from Soul to Soul and Generation to Generation. V 7 'I can feel a white Flame of Hope' - AWESOME. I score it TEN. Love you lots in Poetry - JOHN X (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 75 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (12/29/2009 8:09:00 PM)

    nice theme! nice presentation! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 29, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 29, 2009


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