A Windflower Of Mine Poem by emma xinyi

A Windflower Of Mine

Rating: 4.3


She is bright and cheerful just like the sun,
When you fall she is your cushion you can rely on,
Like a passion friut, at first it's bitterand strange
But if you taste it more carefully you will understand
the positive side.
Windflowers are lovely but when the time comes
Her spirit will flow away with the wind and you'll
Never find her.
Without her there are no more sunshine in my eyes
We should appreciate every moment with herr
She Gave us love and life.
Oh Windflower, you and her are so alike
How you spread your love so wide
I Love You Both.
You are the river of my life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 12 August 2009

She Gave us love and life. Oh Windflower, you and her are so alike How you spread your love so wide I Love You Both. You are the river of my life wonderful. its a good poem and shows that you can write more good poems..liekd the romantic idea and appreciate you.. verses are well set and whole poem is well written..10/10

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Marieta Maglas 11 June 2009

i like this simile ''She is bright and cheerful just like the sun'' lovely write..nice to read..10++

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