Dave Alan Walker

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A Window Of Time - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Looking through a window
where time had stopped
I see my mother calling
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Comments about A Window Of Time by Dave Alan Walker

  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (5/12/2016 2:31:00 AM)


    Right up until her death
    My mother would always talk
    of a ghost at the window
    that looked just like me. a sense of mystery......... the boy running to mum..... mum telling of a ghost...... it is very interesting to read this and think.. thank you. tony (Report) Reply

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  • Susan Williams Susan Williams (4/27/2016 2:47:00 PM)


    I like the mystery of this. At first I thought you were looking through the metaphoric window of memory and then you took us to Stephen King territory. Well written and well enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (6/28/2015 6:06:00 PM)


    Very nostalgic my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad Akhtar Jawad (3/3/2015 5:18:00 PM)


    A wonderful write, a great poem.....................10 (Report) Reply

  • Brian Stafford Brian Stafford (2/14/2015 1:37:00 PM)


    excellent, makes the hairs on the back of the neck stand up! (Report) Reply

  • Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (11/1/2014 9:02:00 AM)


    Hello poet friend Dave. An interesting poem and great ending, I enjoyed, Loyd
    PS: Please check out my new book on Amazon or Barnes and Noble, Pumpkinny Tales. Thanks for your support. (Report) Reply

  • Sossi Khachadourian Sossi Khachadourian (10/26/2014 1:40:00 PM)


    Excellent write my friend appreciative.thank you for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Michelle Claus Michelle Claus (8/5/2014 11:29:00 PM)


    Captivating - and haunting - I like this poem... and I'm unsettled by it. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul Lyn Paul (8/5/2014 8:52:00 PM)


    Great write with such a suited title and interesting comments. Thank You Dave (Report) Reply

  • Negar Zakavati Negar Zakavati (8/5/2014 3:01:00 PM)


    Please do read my poem We Are (Report) Reply

  • Negar Zakavati Negar Zakavati (8/5/2014 2:58:00 PM)


    so good so good. It was fascinating. Thanks Dave Alan Walker (Report) Reply

  • Leslie Philibert (8/5/2014 9:19:00 AM)


    a fine write, like the way the central image turns.. (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine Diane Hine (8/5/2014 4:49:00 AM)


    An enchanting poem - time is such a strange phenomenon. (Report) Reply

  • Ken E Hall (9/6/2013 7:38:00 AM)


    A moment in time frozen in the mind with a window enveloping the memories of mother linking a powerful ending very original and moving...regards (Report) Reply

  • Jodie Hardy (9/5/2013 2:46:00 PM)


    Wonderful how you managed to bring time round in a circle, ending where it began. Lovely to read x (Report) Reply

  • Noreen Carden Noreen Carden (9/4/2013 2:24:00 AM)


    Hello Dave this is a wonderful poem i have been reading your poems and enjoying them very much
    you write about what you observe some of your poems are heart rending
    Thank you for reading my poem and your kind words (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar Geetha Jayakumar (8/30/2013 6:54:00 AM)


    A touching poem indeed. Its very true, especially when they feel it...Loved reading it...

    Please do read my poem Happy Learning Dear! , when you are free...thanks a lot. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren Valerie Dohren (8/5/2013 2:15:00 PM)


    Very moving poem Dave, beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Jayne Davies Jayne Davies (8/5/2013 12:46:00 PM)


    Well done Dave! A good write x (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (8/5/2013 9:32:00 AM)


    A really beautiful poem about mother and child relationship that time alters. I am really touched with sentiments of this lovely poem. (Report) Reply










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