Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 4,045 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

A Window Of Time - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Looking through a window
where time had stopped
I see my mother calling
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Comments about A Window Of Time by Dave Alan Walker

  • Gold Star - 6,578 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (6/28/2015 6:06:00 PM)

    Very nostalgic my friend. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 43,665 Points Akhtar Jawad (3/3/2015 5:18:00 PM)

    A wonderful write, a great poem.....................10 (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,779 Points Brian Stafford (2/14/2015 1:37:00 PM)

    excellent, makes the hairs on the back of the neck stand up! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,675 Points Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (11/1/2014 9:02:00 AM)

    Hello poet friend Dave. An interesting poem and great ending, I enjoyed, Loyd
    PS: Please check out my new book on Amazon or Barnes and Noble, Pumpkinny Tales. Thanks for your support. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 803 Points Sossi Khachadourian (10/26/2014 1:40:00 PM)

    Excellent write my friend appreciative.thank you for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,082 Points Michelle Claus (8/5/2014 11:29:00 PM)

    Captivating - and haunting - I like this poem... and I'm unsettled by it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,741 Points Lyn Paul (8/5/2014 8:52:00 PM)

    Great write with such a suited title and interesting comments. Thank You Dave (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 28 Points Negar Zakavati (8/5/2014 3:01:00 PM)

    Please do read my poem We Are (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 28 Points Negar Zakavati (8/5/2014 2:58:00 PM)

    so good so good. It was fascinating. Thanks Dave Alan Walker (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,301 Points Leslie Philibert (8/5/2014 9:19:00 AM)

    a fine write, like the way the central image turns.. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,112 Points Diane Hine (8/5/2014 4:49:00 AM)

    An enchanting poem - time is such a strange phenomenon. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,830 Points Ken E Hall (9/6/2013 7:38:00 AM)

    A moment in time frozen in the mind with a window enveloping the memories of mother linking a powerful ending very original and moving...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 73 Points Jodie Hardy (9/5/2013 2:46:00 PM)

    Wonderful how you managed to bring time round in a circle, ending where it began. Lovely to read x (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,999 Points Noreen Carden (9/4/2013 2:24:00 AM)

    Hello Dave this is a wonderful poem i have been reading your poems and enjoying them very much
    you write about what you observe some of your poems are heart rending
    Thank you for reading my poem and your kind words (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/30/2013 6:54:00 AM)

    A touching poem indeed. Its very true, especially when they feel it...Loved reading it...

    Please do read my poem Happy Learning Dear! , when you are free...thanks a lot. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,401 Points Valerie Dohren (8/5/2013 2:15:00 PM)

    Very moving poem Dave, beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 178 Points Jayne Davies (8/5/2013 12:46:00 PM)

    Well done Dave! A good write x (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,093 Points Savita Tyagi (8/5/2013 9:32:00 AM)

    A really beautiful poem about mother and child relationship that time alters. I am really touched with sentiments of this lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,994 Points Kanniappan Kanniappan (8/5/2013 5:01:00 AM)

    I think it happens to all elderly people due to dementia that they see somebody is watching them, somebody passing by the closed window, somebody lying on the top of the loft. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,236 Points Paola Degli Esposti (8/5/2013 4:53:00 AM)

    beautiful writing. delicate theme. (Report) Reply

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