A Winter Day Poem by kirilee S..

A Winter Day

Rating: 5.0


The cleaverest creature is a snake,
Who spends his winter not awake'
Sleeping in his long thin bed'
Brewing venom in his head.

The human is a different sort'
Who spends his winter watching sport'
Yelling abuse from a concret stand'
Emptying out his venom glands.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather S 17 November 2008

this poem is very imagery and enternaning its a good poem a strong 10!

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Wandering Scarlet 29 October 2008

i like this, an interesting take on human nature, exposing our restless approach on life, in comparisan to nature, which rests as us humans are in constant frenzy

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 April 2008

we humans are vulnerable..............

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