A Winter School Day Poem by leung yutung

A Winter School Day

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Wind and night is like a monster
Stress and lonely is a bloody killer
It is just a sorrow night
hopelessness and despair is my life
I envy to be love and care
Hope to see the light in dark night

Until a night, an angle come
friendy and care is comfortable
the sad night was broken by the bright knife
A milk in a hungry child^s eye
Alittle hope can change my life

The bell is ringing, the day is ended
You are gone and i miss you so
Your life is going on like a bright sun
Thank you for your love and care

Summer is coming
Winter is leaving
sun is shinning
Ice is melting

Looking back to the darknsee
walking forwoard to the brightness
Good luck the angle in my eye
give your love to the poor life

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is the first poem I write, hope you love my poem. It is about a story of myself, i hate going school at f.1 becausce i donnot how to make friendys to each other, also homework and dictation make me feel despair but until day, i get in a goup and i met a angel, she is friendy and care about me, so she change my life to happyly.But night and sun is a day, you cannot change your life to no challenge and always being happy.In my life in f.2, she leave me becausce she is time to have a new beginning, but this i learn to being stronge like a man, i hope she can have a brightness life. thankyou, and hope the reader like it! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yu Yinchun 13 July 2012

this poem let me know you more before form three of you i can not believe in your poem say that you are so pessimistic because now of you is so optimism . give me some feeling you is so approachable and hope people can care you i think this angel go away but will have a next one to care you hope you can see your angel=]

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