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(Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

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A Winter-White Wish.

Fierce, glittering winter-bright Moon,
Lighting this white, mysterious world.
Shine throughout night, he'll be home soon
And need your lamp to keep unfurling
Each rise and fall of glistening
Snow-bound field and hidden lane.
I'll stand with candle, - listening.
Please guide his way back here again.

Submitted: Monday, January 05, 2009


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  • Yelena M. (4/20/2009 9:36:00 AM)

    A wonderful mysterious imagery reminding me of the poetry of symbolists.Thanks for sharing!
    Best wishes.
    A.

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  • Gordon Wilkinson (3/19/2009 2:18:00 PM)

    loved the feelings it shows 10

  • Chitra - (1/19/2009 10:18:00 AM)

    A very picturesque poem with the message aptly delivered

  • Palas Kumar Ray (1/18/2009 5:24:00 AM)

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    I can see you waiting with the candle in the moonlit way
    also I can see your winter-white wishes my dear fay.
    Your poem's truly visualised.
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  • Bob Blackwell (1/17/2009 6:27:00 AM)

    Reminded me of a time many years ago when I used to walk home along a tree clad winding lane. The moon used to cast many shadows but gave me light to show the way. A lovely poem, of a winter landscape. Bob

  • Kevin Wells (1/16/2009 2:05:00 PM)

    A very picturesque piece. I can imagine these words inspiring the subject of a painting. There seems to be a whole story waiting to be told behind this cleverly constructed verse.

  • Deva De Silva (1/16/2009 9:22:00 AM)

    Vivid, whole, and heart-felt… When I reached the last verse it cuffed my insides.

  • Scott Austin (1/16/2009 4:29:00 AM)

    You have allowed the read to image these words in a prefect picture…thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us.

    Scott

  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (1/14/2009 2:45:00 PM)

    I saw you with the candle. and i saw the snow.. this is magnific... Is it personal, or creative, or personal with a bit of creativity?

  • Sid John Gardner. (1/14/2009 1:40:00 PM)

    A 'Frost' like poem Fay.Nice poem.
    Sid xx

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