A Wintry Day.. Poem by KEERTHANA DINESH 1998

A Wintry Day..

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A snowy day on the sides of the Red sea
The city seems to be covered
With dazzling snow sparkles.
The roads feel like to be deserted
With the houses bolted and shut.
The people none roamed in the city
Like it was hit by a disaster
But where do the birds go
On this frozen snowy day?
They are caught in the
Deadly black hands of snow.
But we enjoy the coolness
Very happily and joyfully.
But while we sip the hot tea
Think about the frozen minds of birds

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shalini Sundararamalingam 12 September 2009

nice thought, at this age, you have done a decent job of composing a poem, it can also be further enhanced with better rhyming and framing..

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Nice thought and poem Keerthana, good effort

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