A Wish! Poem by nahed nassr

A Wish!

Rating: 5.0


At the dinner table!
Who can exchange
With you
Melody of forks
Music of words
How was your day?
How delicious the soup?
And pass me the salt!
I envy them

Every morning!
who have the chance
To taste your face
To drink the light
Your eyes shed
I envy them

with passion!
Who share you
The kiss of welcome
And the Farwell hold
The touch on your hair
Of I miss you
and of well done
I envy them

for you!
Who are Very close
In happiness,
sadness
And with a rose
Can tell you
what they wish
I envy them

If only the time to retreat
Or to freeze up
Would love to live in that moment
Forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 March 2008

a write well done and delighting

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Ivan Donn Carswell 17 June 2007

Nahed, congratulations on a fabulous first post on Poem Hunter. This is a poem worthy of much re-reading. I will await further postings eagerly. Rgds, Ivan

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Nermin Nazim 17 June 2007

This is really Sublime. I love it. It describes my feelings at certain times, love and devotion, desire, wish and yearning........ very well put, wonderfully described and delightfully exquisite choice of words. HATS OFF.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 16 June 2007

A Beautiful first poem Nahed... What a beautiful statement of love, to drink in the love in your eyes..10 Welcome to poemhunter

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Edna Javelosa 15 June 2007

a beautiful wish 'to drink the light your eyes shed....to live in that moment forever'..10

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