A Wish Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

A Wish

Rating: 4.3


Don't make my nation blue sky for foes to fly.
Don't make my nation pure water for wacko's to drink.
Don't make my nation pleasant air for rivals to breath.
Don't make my nation peaceful earth for enemy's to walk.
Make my nation burning sun so they don't even dare to see.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 04 March 2009

how interesting wish and ending line...a buring nation like the sun....thanks...10

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Jacob Gifford 11 March 2009

You must realy like your country

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Jacob Gifford 11 March 2009

You must realy like your country In a good way

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Let there be this kind of good poems and nice to read.

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Walterrean Salley 24 December 2009

One's nation is one's home.

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Bhavani R 09 November 2009

Inspiring and motivating.....10/10

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Costa Anakiev 01 November 2009

Nice work. I often think the same way. Konstantin.

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Antonio Liao 03 May 2009

wonderful.you must be a hero in your nation...you have a nationalistic ideas of a beautiful country.they must be thanful to you....your great man..thank you and God bless

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