yoonoos peerbocus

Rookie - 167 Points (05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

A Womb's Virtues - Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

What's womb beauty but an art divine
Where in my soul's graces shine
Sun like animates my being's charms
With a face, form, gesture, voice and a mind

Of a race that was and as such I'm myself
A part of the great cause, fed by some one
Larger than me.Strength matters little,
Speed not at all, no worrying, no plan

Just being there-a childish beauty,
Dream woven, cradled in now-
Of the oncoming awakening in the immortal
Better half side of life, have no knowledge.

Comments about A Womb's Virtues by yoonoos peerbocus

  • Rookie John Traynor (3/12/2013 1:08:00 AM)

    A greater cause. Definitely the greatest cause. Very nice (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 886 Points Reyvrex Questor Reyes (10/7/2012 4:22:00 AM)

    Speaking of virtues, it could refer to both man or woman. And the womb has its virtues- or rather its blessings. Here's what I said about virtue:

    Virtue And The Beast

    To run, we could from threats besetting us
    But naught we do for demons from within
    Their obstacles laid on the paths we pass
    Dictate the rise and fall our lives contain

    Virtue does to a woman bind desire
    When dreams of wayward thrills it would suppress
    As though alarm when hearts are set afire
    It screams out loud should she unzips her dress

    Monsters and ghouls are far removed in woods
    If there be what the heart so truly dreads
    In man is beast lurking in murky moods
    Knows many arms and sleeps in many beds. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 184 Points Karen Sinclair (10/6/2012 12:47:00 PM)

    A grand subject so primarily overlooked in poetry terms, you embraced it with such delicacy, lovely poetry indeed...tyvm karen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lynette Hazel (12/4/2011 8:08:00 AM)

    delicate response to the subject (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 119 Points Fayeda Vanimel (8/13/2011 12:23:00 AM)

    exquisite..elegant....kp it up. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 192 Points Macanthony Chijioke Nwatu (4/22/2011 8:04:00 PM)

    Its gracious sir; i thank you onbehalf of the world for that beautiful insight for those who own the 'art divine' and those who own it not and those who are yet to own it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 192 Points Macanthony Chijioke Nwatu (4/22/2011 8:01:00 PM)

    Its gracious sir; i thank you onbehalf of the world for that beautiful insight for those who own the 'art divine' and those who own it not and those who are yet to own it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Priyanka Choudhury (4/21/2011 9:09:00 AM)

    How true! A pat of a greater cause, n yet in life we live like nothing meaningful exists but ourselves (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mohamed Umar Farooq (4/20/2011 8:29:00 AM)

    great piece of composition and it makes me forecast the awakening of the doomsday.. the real awakening much more effective than the so called intellectual awakening we undergo in the world... choice of words and arrangenments are remarkable (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anand Rai (4/18/2011 9:25:00 AM)

    Wonderfully written especially what's womb beauty...divine (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anil Kumar (4/17/2011 3:33:00 PM)

    Womb being compared to a cradle where infant before coming to this world rejoice the knowledge free environment....! Its beautiful....Nice wording.....I like it... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ayandare Mayowa (4/17/2011 11:09:00 AM)

    Good use of words. Like your style and thanks for your encouraging comments. thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aarti Sonawane (4/17/2011 8:26:00 AM)

    such a wonderful poem.....really liked it...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Khalid Hamid Changal (4/17/2011 7:49:00 AM)

    sir, this is a nice work by you. keep writing n thanx for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hina Firdose (4/16/2011 12:39:00 PM)

    Beautiful poetry! I really like it. Thanx for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Bancroft Boreland (4/15/2011 11:17:00 AM)

    just being there-a childish beauty, i like that very much. this poem should appeal to everyone. fantastic writing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sameer Gardner (4/14/2011 6:32:00 AM)

    its brilliant it actually makes one feel so charmed and one sees birth from a beautiful perspective and feels blessed :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Olive Lasat (4/13/2011 8:55:00 PM)

    i like your poem...how i wish i may have your stlye...thank you for sharing.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Silly Artist (4/12/2011 4:58:00 PM)

    What a beautiful poem. The innocence of a newborn is unlimited but the way you end your poem shows that though a newborn may die, atleast they had the chance to be in 'this' world and that they are now in a better place.
    -Continue spreading words of truth around the world- (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Silly Artist (4/12/2011 9:23:00 AM)

    Some believe that life begins after we are born but that is not true. Our parents, both mother and father, marked the beginning of life but what is life compared to the One who allowed it and placed a soul inside? Great work and continue to spread words of truth around the world =D (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 10, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 22, 2011

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