A World Going Crazy Poem by Desiree Whitamore

A World Going Crazy

Rating: 4.0


whats wrong with the world today?
so many things in dissaray
everything is not okay
and i just wanna know
why its fine to just let go.
so many girls in magazines
telling all of us how we should be
it just doesn't make sense to me
is everybody going crazy?
can anybody try and save me?
how do i escape this life, escape this world
lets go back to: 'make peace, not war'
rewind right to the past
don't ever think about looking back
'cause we just don't deserve
something so beautiful, and disatrous as this old world.
if we can't fight for it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 26 July 2008

Another clearly written piece that I can recommend. There are always things to improve. But I believe there is plenty of time to correct any flaws. This thing should be read now, The sentiments expressed can't wait. GW62

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