A Young Coast Guard Writes To His Eloped Fiancee Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Young Coast Guard Writes To His Eloped Fiancee

Rating: 5.0


I see a far away yacht at sea toss with the mysterious waves
And the red painting of the Western sky fades away.
An old sleepy Queen jumps out from the twilight sky
But I cannot sleep as I am not a King anyway.
I am awake till dawn
And when my reliever comes
Then I'll be off to my lonesome bed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 13 August 2009

The colors in this one are muted - the tone is ever gentle. Another fine, melancholy read. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 06 August 2009

A lonesome letter indeed. I like the imagery of the sunset sky. Good atmosphere in this one.10/10. Warm regards, Sandra

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nimal dunuhinga

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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