A Young Sunny Day Poem by Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)

A Young Sunny Day

Rating: 4.3


once she called me
the wishes vanished away
in the midday heat of
the young sunny day
radiating from
my sins about hell
take a bow now
and shoot the sunny spirit
that flows to the world
the damaged properties
now toll on the powers
that atrophied from the dying sun

as the knife falls
as gentlemen calls
in the courtyard
where no one is faithful
where is the greatest war
between me and you
as the foolish get ready to
gain from us
the touch of strength
the judgment has arrived
now toll on their consciences
and trembling paws from bearable fear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
The Lost.. 09 November 2009

where no one is faithful where is the greatest war 10 ya mohamed: P.do u know what i mean? ? if you dont, nvm: P nice poem.

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Romeo Della Valle 08 November 2009

Wow, Mohammed, what a great piece, well penned, full of feelings flawing through your magic pen...Like I did when writing my poem titled 'A QUEEN WAS BORN'.you got my vote 10+++ you well deserved it, keep it up!

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