Crimson Love

Rookie - 67 Points (18 / Prince Charming)

Abandoned - Poem by Crimson Love

Stray far from the pain that abandoned you,
Lose yourself to become whole again,
Lost in the land of the dead your shunned,
Banned from living as you are from dying,
No body wants you why are you crying?
Your lost inbetween, Your lost feeling numb,
Your lost to a day that was never yours,
You fell victim to the victims,
You lost your sanity, you lost the past,
Your running from better run fast,
Long live the present, just hope it doesn't last.

Comments about Abandoned by Crimson Love

  • Rookie - 204 Points Stan Petrovich (11/24/2011 8:44:00 AM)

    Once, while running from a bad bad situation, I found myself in one even worse. I was attacked by hungry bears. Had I stayed where I had been I might not be here to tell of it. But who knows? (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 525 Points Vipins Puthooran (9/22/2011 1:12:00 PM)

    You fell victim to the victims//
    Long live the present, just hope it doesn't last//
    I like these two lines..
    Good poetry here (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 22, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, September 23, 2011

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