Abandoned Little Home Poem by Marilyn Lott

Abandoned Little Home

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It is the cutest little house
You wonder about its story
You know that it was lovely
In bygone days with all its glory.

A couple, probably newly weds
Moved in and made big plans
Worked together relentlessly
On this worn ‘ole dried out land.

Babies then were born
A family to pass it on
This little house and windmill
A place they could belong.

As I travel ‘cross the country
So many homes like this
They are blessed, I know they are
With a gentle Angel's kiss.

Abandoned Little Home
Wednesday, September 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: abandoned,home,past
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 13 September 2017

We wonder about story and lovely glory reminds about cutest house of the past. A place you belonged is in limelight of memory. Beautifully penned poem is shared here.10

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Rajnish Manga 13 September 2017

Nice to know the story of the land and the people, their moderate but abandoned homes. It has a charm of its own. Not a tourist place in the conventional sense. Thanks.

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Marilyn Lott 13 September 2017

Yes, there is charm and beauty off the beaten path that we are amazed at. Thank you for your comment. I don't get in here often enough. I sold two poems for text books and I need to get in here daily!

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 September 2017

A nice poem on old days with a smooth flow and rhyming. Feel good to read. Thanks for sharing.

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Marilyn Lott 13 September 2017

I appreciate your sweet comment. Thank you so much.

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