Edward Kofi Louis

Gold Star - 24,126 Points (13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

Abbottabad - Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

'Operation Neptune's Spear'!
Abbottabad;
Really virtual,
With helicopters over the house.
Abbottabad, abbot, to, tab, at, oat, bat, toad, dot, boat, bad;
But, the Taliban have no helicopter.
Abbottabad!
Working in the night,
And, at early dawn;
Life!
For start ups;
Muse!
From the Silicon Valley;
With software and hardware to target a man!
'Operation Neptune's Spear'.


Comments about Abbottabad by Edward Kofi Louis

  • Silver Star - 3,824 Points Wahab Abdul (5/3/2013 12:14:00 PM)

    too late a poem on a situation, how are you too late, sir? a nice poem indeed.. liked it.. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (5/3/2013 11:17:00 AM)

    very good poem Osama vs Obama thank dear (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 3, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 18, 2013


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