About A Heavenly Story Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

About A Heavenly Story

Rating: 5.0


Adorned in its glory,
A heavenly story.
Bliss, its inventory
Makes the mind feel hoary
With hope and no worry;
Prompts one in a hurry.
In a world of flurry
Where creatures are furry
And the folks are airy.
Its bright hue does vary
And gleams like a fairy,
Milky like a dairy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noel Horlanda 31 May 2009

Again this is nicely written, flawless, and nicely calculated rhythm and a tint of imagery. thanks...

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Ruerd Visser 02 June 2009

Makes the mind feel hoary, Lets hope the mind becomes more seasoned like a ripe fruit waitig to be picked. Angelgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd

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Shashendra Amalshan 03 June 2009

hey liked the rhymes very musical..nice short and sweet verse indeed... thanks for this one 10++

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 March 2010

i think i will agree to the comment of mr noel horlanda

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Himadari Jayasinghe 25 October 2009

Good wordplay! I like it

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Chitra - 16 June 2009

heavnely indeed...! 10!

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Luwi Habte 07 June 2009

well, this is a nice poem well done but a little bit short short and sweet!

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Kesav Easwaran 05 June 2009

no story there; well 'you said only about'...good word play there Obinna...cleverly written piece...10

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