(5 3 38 / leipzig)

about to take off

He always looks as though he is about
to take the clothes off women that he meets,
then hesitates, as if he had a bout
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  • ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (4/26/2009 10:45:00 PM)

    that was a cute and beautiful poem...

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  • Native Dreamer (1/7/2009 4:55:00 PM)

    Brilliant response you can sense the movement so well in its absence

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