About You........ Poem by Ruby Mostazir

Ruby. I like these lines. So simple. And so lovely. May i add with smile! .. you must be cried.. heavy rain fall last night.. may you smile...: -) . but this depends on moods. dear i m not altering. your poem is complete and nice write. tenner peace..

@Muhammad Ali thnk you...its my pleasure :)

short and powerful, , nice, , ,

Great connection as teardrops are really the rain from our heart.

Short and Sweet write...quiet a powerful words..Loved it.

দেখো কাঁদছে প্রেম প্রকৃতি তোমায় না পেয়ে- একদিন তুমিও কাঁদবে!

You must have cried a lot.............. heavy rain. short but meaningful dear poetess. tony

heavy rain as your cry, deep and powerful thank u dear poetess for your thinking.. tony

Profound words used with brevity. Thanks.

Rain and tears.. beautifully crafted. Amusing and heart touching. Thanks for sharing.