Javier Falcon

Rookie - 40 Points (October 11,1990 / Miami, Florida)

Absolute Love (Acrostic)


Almost never found,
But gorgeous at first sight,
Seen from a point of view almost no one has,
Obscure to the common sight,
Luxurious to those who accomplish it,
Utterly perpetuous for those who conserve it,
Tender enough to appreciate and an,
Extraordinary experience.

Loving to the outer most passion,
Of no absolute return,
Vulnerable at most, but,
Eternal when at its best.

Submitted: Thursday, July 03, 2008
Edited: Monday, July 19, 2010

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Comments about this poem (Absolute Love (Acrostic) by Javier Falcon )

  • Rookie - 51 Points Cassandra Jasmine (8/20/2013 10:21:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem
    Ever so heart-warming
    Also heart-warming
    Umbrella (For the un-returned love ;))
    Truly beautifully written
    Infinity lives
    Far away, love can travel
    Unfortunately, not always true,
    Lovely, of course! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Tim Kashorek (11/23/2008 1:28:00 PM)

    hmm...i don't think that i have read any acrostic poems on PH before this. great use of words. Some people when writing acrostics sacrifice meaning for the start of the phrase. great job a 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ershad Mazumder (10/17/2008 9:34:00 PM)

    Live in your soul

    Do not live in your body
    Body is full of greed
    desires and lust
    Destined to be dust.

    Live in your soul
    To feel what you are
    And to feel what is your
    destination. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 123 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (8/10/2008 1:21:00 PM)

    I love this! ! you are good and you are so young. that's good.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heidi Wiggin (7/15/2008 10:55:00 PM)

    The best description of it ive ever read
    awesome (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Millie: willalwayshavehope! ! (7/3/2008 11:46:00 PM)

    you didnt tell me you put 2 more new poems up! !
    ughh
    eternal is SUCH a strong word. you used it very well.
    great job.


    x3,
    mill (Report) Reply

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