Abyss Poem by Ichigo Tachibana

Abyss

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Abyss is nothingness blackness
everything that is black is abyss
something you cant control
something that is scary
something people run from
others just stay and watch
others wish they could stay
but their legs just run

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Very nice poem I like the way you write Krista

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 17 December 2008

Nice poem...Thought provoking....A bit abstract.....I think 'everything that is black' is Not abyss!

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