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Rabi Anata
(8/14/2009 12:13:00 AM) |
To me this is all complex, but it flows so well and the meaning is interesting. I like it a lot.: ]
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Jasmin Whyte
(3/21/2009 9:14:00 AM) |
this is a strange complex poem. A longing for re-unity, and a deliverance of something in a changed way. Hope it has brought you peace
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Yoonoos Peerbocus
(3/17/2009 1:06:00 PM) |
an inner tension.........through an alter ego..self '/children.........split emotions at odds..but soul stirring all through
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Ravi A
(3/17/2009 12:31:00 PM) |
A nice work. This is what every mother expects from their children.
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Chitra -
(12/27/2008 1:47:00 AM) |
a deep poetic connection established with the Higher name
Heres wishing you and your near ones a Happy 2009
Cheers
Chitra
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Shimon Weinroth
(9/29/2008 3:09:00 PM) |
a summons is also a calling both heart wretching end encouraging, you are still
saddled with the responsability
a lovely echoing of emotions deeply personal, thanks for sharing,
all the best
Shimon
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Shimon Weinroth
(9/29/2008 3:08:00 PM) |
a summons is also a calling both heart wretching end encouraging, you are still
saddled with the responsability
a lovely echoing of emotions deeply personal, thanks for sharing,
all the best
Shimon
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palas kumar ray
(8/26/2008 4:25:00 AM) |
In Hinduism this is a very common phenomenon to observe that a devotee of the Lord Krishna (God) is worshiping the God as a child with motherly affection, Love and care.This is nicely picturised in this poem where the poet herself acts as the mother. Nice Poem.
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