Accepted Poem by sara Rodriguez

Accepted

Rating: 5.0


I get hut with your twisted words
And irritating personality, making yourself a
Victim, soothing me down with incline words.
Never caring for me.
Trying to say that you do.
I just can’t see what you say you shown me.
My heart is broken into two
Loving my baby and you
You don’t know what he is how he treats me,
What I am to him I just wish you except me and
Choices because my baby is one of them.
He is my everything, but you put him down
As if he is nothing
Man I just wish to be accepted.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dislocated Heart 21 May 2009

If one doesnt care.. dont waste time on them, they never will.. Theres million of ppl in the world.. and many thats willing enough to help, love and care for you.

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Marieta Maglas 21 May 2009

''My heart is broken into two Loving my baby and you'' a nice poem of family love. keep working 10++

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