Accident Poem by anna burgdorf

Accident

Rating: 3.3


the rain is drippin
down the glass
i can fell the midst
seeping in the cracks

my head is throbbing
faster than my heart
i dont think i hvae a pulse
actually
anymore

the color red blinds my sight
i fell numb
as i see the lights

if only my friend
didnt lie to me
tell me they were sober
when they really did drink

i notice my senses
are startin to fade
my eyes now only
see a haze

i really am fading away
no longer now will i awake.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kenneth Anstiss 12 February 2009

Sad poem Anna, a great many thoughts in there, just a tip, spell check might have helped it along, but I still enjoyed it.

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sacramento ca
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