maria sudibyo

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Accidental Smile - Poem by maria sudibyo

there were two people met
they're walking in the street
one was an old man
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Comments about Accidental Smile by maria sudibyo

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (7/1/2008 10:57:00 PM)

    You have perfectly caught this instant, Maria, and have given us - readers chance to smile from the third party, it is fine...
    Best wishes,
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  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (5/1/2008 12:08:00 AM)

    Great poem...a fine write

    and yep...smiles are addictive..and lift your spirits


    all the best

    jon (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (3/13/2008 1:16:00 AM)

    smile is the best medicine........................ (Report) Reply








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