(04/25/1997 / Indiana)

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Aching Pain

My heart hurts
My bodys full of pain
And all you do is sit.
Sit there and watch me suffer.
Tears roll down my cheeks
and there is a frown
upon my face.
My eyes turn red.
My heart starts
beating faster and faster.
I feel the pain
getting stronger and stronger
in my body
and yet your still watching...
watching me suffer
watching my cry.
You never ask me if im ok.
You just sit there and talk to
your friends.
So I try and forget you
but everytime I get away
you bring me back to love you.
Back to the Aching Pain
I want to get away from you
and the pain but im afraid.
Too afraid of you.
Afraid you'll make my pain worst.
The pain that makes me
cry all night.
I'm too afraid you will make
everyone hate my.
But yet I try
and I suffer more and more.

Submitted: Tuesday, September 20, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, November 01, 2011

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  • Dianna Renate Evans (4/6/2012 12:32:00 PM)

    I love writing it makes me feel ok... I write my feelings and it turns into these poems

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  • Jonathan Maldonado (3/24/2012 7:26:00 PM)

    I like that you are'nt afraid to write your experiences, either first hand or second, down even when they may be ugly you mold them into something you beautiful with your words. There's a real sense of voice in this one Keep on writing keep on improving

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  • *BleedingHeart* *Arielle* (12/16/2011 10:17:00 AM)

    Wow i foundd a new favorite to keep on read from let em know when u post new poems

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  • Dianna Renate Evans (10/20/2011 6:20:00 PM)

    thanks dylan :) lol

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  • Dylan Gaudreault (10/18/2011 10:31:00 AM)

    Another brilliant write, this one is very moving, keep it up

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  • Dianna Renate Evans (10/17/2011 1:28:00 PM)

    thanks u guys that means alot to me i like ur guys poems too :)

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  • Redneck 3 (10/14/2011 4:00:00 PM)

    i like this one alot

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  • Crimson Love (10/14/2011 1:11:00 PM)

    Beautifully written, your a very talented poet! Simply Brilliant :)

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  • Dianna Renate Evans (9/22/2011 10:09:00 AM)

    thanks for the comments it means alot to me and i will continue writing thanks! !

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  • Silly Artist (9/21/2011 11:35:00 AM)

    such a sad poem. It brings the heartbreaking reality of unrequited first love and the fact your 'love' may ignore you and your feelings. Trust me, I know the feeling first hand. Continue writing, for you say the truth, even when its bitter and not sweet.

    gr8 work

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