Action Love Poem by kwane Lamb

Action Love

Rating: 3.0


When you are your loneliest
You begin to see how mistreated
And how your lover was conceded

You know just at that moment
You deserve better
You deserve better forever

Your loneliness wakes up the
Need to be really and truly loved
By someone...not the promise of love.

You know now what action love means,
It means love personified
Giving you back your sweet womanly pride,

What away to recieve...love
From another(all action) ...not a promise.
A promise is like 'A's H's' everyone has one.

To wake with an action love is an...Orgasm
Within itself.
Real love there is nothing else.

Imagine the pleasure of going to sleep
With action love...Damn what a night,
The unexpected...top flight,

What a sight,
Action love...so right,
a thrill and a chill...to real.

You can almost know what your day will...
Be like, special in every way
And believe me that's o.k.

Yes! I want action love...
I need action love...
I am demanding action love,

With sugar on top...
I'll buy some lace later...ciao girls.
Back to the drawing room.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 September 2009

Your loneliness wakes up the Need to be really and truly loved By someone...not the promise of love...this particular stage must be filled at any cost.. it gives birth to thousand of thoughts in mind and some times creat and inferior gap in the mid and that is dangerous...rally beautiful poem....10 read mine you go alone...

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